Brabus,
Thanks for the quick and thorough reply. I'll focus my new personal statements on those points.
Were you hired into an AGR or a TR position? If TR, did you discuss anything about your full-time job or activities and how that would positively, if at all, affect your duties as a reservist/guardsman?
I'm readying my application for attempt #2. Any recommendations on the personal statement from those with approvals?
My previous memo was long but covered professional, personal, and family reasons why an approval would be best for AF. Maybe less would be more this time around?